I heard someone say this on that house wives show and I thought it was a stupid saying then... Its not really the message behind the words, its more how its worded, it just sounds ....ridiculous... ugh, Its very hard for me to put what I'm trying to say into words, I don't know why I feel the way about it, but thats merely an opinion and shouldn't be taken towards the art work itself. >U< The art is put together very nicely. Good job!
I know this is basically meant to show off the features of this font, so this is a minor nitpick on the poster's composition that you can choose to ignore: since this looks like all capital letters, some sort of spacing or punctuation between "You only live once" and "But if you do it right" would have given the eyes a bit of a rest. I found it a bit difficult to read and comprehend the message because its all CAPITAL BLOCK LETTERS. But, like I said, since this is just a showcase of the font rather than a print to be sold, this is just a minor nitpick that you don't have to implement.